承诺里的希望
刺眼的曙光唤醒了我。
我望向海的那一方，
眼泪在这时滴落，
激起心湖涟漪。
我才惊觉你已不在这。。。
你离开地无声无息，没有留言。。。
到远方建筑你的乌托邦。
为你，我愿意。。。
跨过时间的地图。。。然后等待。
亲爱的，如果你看得到我的留言。。。
我要让你知道，
我会一直在这里驻守我们的承诺。
Cry1706诗歌翻译，Bibi著
posted by Crayn Tay @ 12:25 PM
6 comments
Crayn, The one & only
這裡所有的文章背后確實有這麼一個主角和他的心情故事。或許你不贊同，或許你無法體會，或許你認為作假，或許你心中還有疑問，或許的種種我也無法解釋。在這裡，透過文章希望你能感受到最平靜，最動容的情感，然後細細品味。只有“有心人”才能真正感受文章中的絲絲情意。或許這裡的文章不是最動聽的故事但它確是最真誠的剖白。
Tuesday, August 09, 2005
我望向海的那一方，
眼泪在这时滴落，
激起心湖涟漪。
我才惊觉你已不在这。。。
你离开地无声无息，没有留言。。。
到远方建筑你的乌托邦。
为你，我愿意。。。
跨过时间的地图。。。然后等待。
亲爱的，如果你看得到我的留言。。。
我要让你知道，
我会一直在这里驻守我们的承诺。
Cry1706诗歌翻译，Bibi著
6 Comments:
As the writter of this poems .. i am very please to know that you had a chinese version of it .. the meaning are more or less then the original version ... i think u must have been putting alot of effort and time to wrote it.. keep it up! and i like it!
a nice poem......
many of feeling is writing in..
i really like it
thanks anonymous here..would u mind to drop some more ur story here..or ur name..thanks for u visit to here.
dear anonymous and especially bibi..tahnsk for ur supporting.. and thansk u spend ur time to visit here.
hwoever wish u all the best..
Awaiting You
The sunrise up,
and wake me up.
I looked down the sea,
with a tears drop on me.
Now I realize that,
you're not with me anymore.
You walked away without notices;
to a place you built your own happiness.
For you I can do anything,
and waiting its just a time being.
Dear, if you could read this,
I would like you to know that,
I'll never forget our promise.
I wrote this poem on the back of my PJK exam paper during form 4. It was dedicated to someone, that I believed he wouldn’t have the chance to read it for his entire life. I used this poem on my English oral exam with a background that I choose of a beautiful hot air balloon facing the sea. It was about a girl who woke up from the hot air balloon and figures it out that her love one had left her. She can only cried and to think backs all those memories and promises that made with her love one. She just wished someday somehow her love one could return but yet she knew that things could never be the same. So she chooses to go on with her life. Although it was just a short poem, but I always keep it in mind cause I love this poem very much.
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