我 累 了
站在這裡，真的很平靜。沒有人打擾，沒有吵雜聲，也沒有被拋棄的夢。
已經五年了……五年來我一直沒有違背過任何承諾，也一直扮演好我的角色。既然人人都說我做得很好，為何你又要離開？
你是我的支柱，是我活着的理由。你是我的快樂，是我翱翔的天空。而你…走了…
是不是我做錯了？是不是他比我更好？
你的選擇是對的？那你過去的夢是不是錯了？
我失去了你，那擁有的還有甚麼意義？那些努力，那些曾經犧牲和放棄的，是不是我太傻了？
一個機會，一個解釋，我都沒有權力擁有。只有…
一個夜晚，一個結束，是我忘了你的方法。我會…
在這裡，從這裡，結束掉。
閉上眼，踏出去，往下墬。
你走了，他笑了，我累了。
我離開，他勝利，你解脫。
我的夢，你的路，這世界。
永別了，對不起，我任性……
posted by Crayn Tay @ 7:27 PM
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7 Comments:
I like your writing.. Seriously.. the tune of the end of every phrase are tunefulness..
Besides that, it also shows that you are indeed tired for the matter that keep inside your mind and I believe you found solace in every full stop you puts.
dear bi, the main character inside the story actually is a story abt suicide..so sad
but actually it also our story...sometime when we feel tired..wat else can make us more nice ??thts important....thanks..bi..
im glad to hv u beside me
爱情不能作比较
Mosquito> agree with u 爱情不能作比较 , but some ppl does not to accept it, the main character in the <"我 累 了" > was actually sad and disappointed with teh love she/ he had...
mosquito> for u...hwo will u overcome for it?? not everyone can hv a positive thinking...
当不爱了，我会选择离开，至少还要留一点自尊给自己。
我看“夏日末末茶”时，最感动的就是郑秀文说，“请让我走得有自尊”。
曾经的努力、牺牲并没有太傻，至少曾经爱过，虽然不见得最后得到了什么。有时付出也是一种幸福。
“閉上眼，踏出去，往下墬”，这一段感觉是去自杀，是吗？
夏日末末茶...was a very good movie for me...i like it so much...and i was also remmeber wat sammi was mention to him... and
有时付出也是一种幸福。....yA LO..i agree... sometime we no need to ask so many feedback..but some ppl was never feedback even a smal smal thing ...or i can say even a "i love u"....
but mosquito..u very clever....this character behind this story u also know wat happen on the main character....
all the words was useless to discuss...important u can always be happy ....then ok liao..
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