Saturday, March 11, 2006

我在这里啊...

走在这条路上,在背后默默跟着你。

下着大雨的四点十八分,我在跟着你。

刚才驾车路过看见了你,一个人淋着雨走着走着。

手里握着伞,我就下车追了过去。

看见你抬头望天,我也停下脚步。

我想此刻的你应该很冷吧...我的心也同样很冷。

我在你背后望着你,那是一个多么奇妙的距离。

你应该没发觉有人会为你淋雨吧?就算手上握着一把伞...

你应该没察觉有人会担心你吧?因为那个人站在你的视线盲点...

你应该没想过有人可以让你依靠吧?答案都收藏在那把伞...

你应该也不会晓得默契可以转换成信赖。

因为站在和你同一条马路的人并不是你要的幸福,对吗?

所以你都不知道...

每一滴雨就好像针刺在身上,让我独自承受吧...

给你彩虹,让你站在彩虹那一边。让你站在你幸福的国度...

下雨了,我站在雨天...

为你求个晴天...

16 Comments:

At 14/3/06 3:01 PM, Blogger 卡門 said...

我看見你的車子
在cafe看見你的背影
我坐的位置,剛好是你的旁邊
而我們中間隔著一片落地玻璃
我假裝沒看見你
單純希望你也沒看見我
那樣的距離確實有點危險
我不知道我們很近還是很遠
很想告訴你,我在這裡
最後還是沒有
假裝有完沒完和身旁的友人比手劃腳的談笑風生
因為你身邊多了一個我不熟悉的“她”。

 
At 14/3/06 6:31 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sory,im nw unable 2 type in chinese...after lookin for your article,i feel a wee bit lonely and some feelin tat i unable to pronoun it!!Do u comprehen?lookin for someone's back is such a lonely feelin,i dun like such this feelin,even eg.when i fetch someone back,i felt that i cannot lose her/him ...even who else..for my own view,evryone is unable 2 look for their own back,they only look in front,they never observe somebody is still waitin for her/him,rite?they never try 2 look at their back..im suffer in confusion nw,i duno whether i hav done sth wrong in te past few time ago...

 
At 19/3/06 3:55 PM, Blogger huixin said...

有点真实
有点虚拟

有点靠近
有点遥远

有点清楚
有点朦胧

有点熟悉
有点陌生

这就是你和我之间
这是最真
也是最假

 
At 30/3/06 3:17 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow, it's a nice article. Quite meaningful. Hopefully u will feel sad too when see my back, means on when i didnt notice you is behind me. haha... what a joke!!
well, thanks for your article, u have reminded me to observe all the people around me, whether is in front of me or at my back. Thanks ya! *o*

 
At 30/3/06 3:44 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey... i have gave u SO MANY comments, write testimonial too me as a reward! thanks. Sorry coz i don't have blog, and don't wish will have it.

Eemay

 
At 9/4/06 11:42 PM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

是否站的位子不同,我们的心就没有了视线。

背后?左方?或许我们都只看着前面。

距离有多远?是近是远根本就不是问题所在。

是心......

我根本不曾在你的心出现。

你也不曾到访我的心。

虽然......两个新都有哪一点空隙。

 
At 9/4/06 11:47 PM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

to mosquito n hui xin..im really thansk u 2..so hv heart also write me a poem and a story at here... thanks ...u all really treat me very very nice...thanks....

then for the anonymous cannot type chinese de.. i knwo wat do u mean with the bad feelign when u are standing bhind a person then tht person totally dunno u was there...but dunno why le...some ppl dunno how to run to the front of tht ppl....

 
At 9/4/06 11:49 PM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

for the anonymous cant type chinese... don too care about the past..coz ia dah berlalu..important is better don do any mistake in future..

eemay...i will felt sad de..coz u are my valueble frens~~~ rite??tht day actually i got a lot words to tell u ...coz u really a nice n hv heart de fren....

 
At 10/4/06 5:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

有没有想过,或许当你让一无所知的对方知道你一直是他的影子时,一切可能都会重写?

 
At 11/4/06 1:08 AM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

我根本不曾在你的心出现。

你也不曾到访我的心。

虽然......两颗心都有哪一点空隙。

haha..wrong words...din check properly.```

 
At 11/4/06 1:13 AM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

i also dunno whether got use or not to let she know....mayb the story will different...

but...at this moment...i know she still cannot forgot someone...

我想这就是主角的感觉吧~

 
At 13/4/06 10:11 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

因为站在和你同一条马路的人并不是你要的幸福,对吗?
也许是对的,但是只要他或她开心幸福的话,我“被那像针的雨”打在身上,又有什么关系呢?
你是否又有想过?
也许有另一个他或她也和你一样,在背后默默的跟着你呢?

 
At 13/4/06 11:47 PM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

min yen i agree with u..mayb bhind us hv another ppl le? but we never know.....

why so kasihan...??

 
At 24/4/06 8:22 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

下雨了,你在哪里。。。

一个人的我,走在大雨中。
没有雨伞,被淋湿了,好冷好冷。

隆隆声的雷,仿佛劈中了我的心。
心情差到了极点,没有人知道。

看着别人撑着一把伞,
没有人来关心我,
没有人来问我 ‘你需要一把伞子吗?’
没有人可以让我依靠,
也没有人可以让我信赖。

心中祈祷,盼望停雨。
慢慢的,雨真的停了。
雨过天晴的感觉真好。
我知道,彩虹一定会出现在天边。
而你,也会在彩虹的令一端,等待着我。。。。
彩虹会带领着我,找到你。
你就是我的幸福。。。

 
At 24/4/06 8:23 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

thank u

 
At 25/4/06 3:49 PM, Blogger Crayn Tay said...

mlpang> 1st thanks a lot for visitng my space n blogger.. thanks.. then ..

2nd thansk for ur concern i think this story had abit touch u or not? hoep u like it..let go also a kind of happiness..

im a kind of ppl very easy to knwo de.. haha but jus im think too fast

 

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